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Charles Nicol's avatar

Interesting sci-fi story. Brisk read if not feeling routine near the end.

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Fredo McBoxhead's avatar

I feared the ending was rushed. Sometimes you gotta trust your gut, I guess.

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Charles Nicol's avatar

Its good overall Sometimes its best to rush it, then draw it out more than it has to.

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